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Extend. Spell

If you're going to resort to making us read a chunk of text, at least make sure you're going to spell it all correctly...

Make this longer as well... Much too short to remain here

Best one so far

I'll complain in real life :p

Super-Blackball responds:

Damn house mates :P

Mild

It's good, and worthy of staying, but you can improve in so many ways. The feeling of speed of two supersonic jets dogfighting wasn't really there, and the angles of viewing the planes sometimes messed up.

Play about with constructing the F-18's so they look right from different angles.

Also, no pilot in the world world ever engage another plane over friendly city soil. They're not even allowed over it normally...

Timing was almost perfect.

The only flaw was it was much too short to be a finished piece. I liked it. The animation was smooth and it synced with the movie (bar the guy going to eat the egg). I like

Good. Not great. But should stay

I can see you tried more than most stick artists do. For that I'm greatful. People who do sticks should be making stuff of this quality and better.

Still. It's not perfect. The music in the preloader stops it loading quickly, and the fight scene did get a bit repeatative with him smashing the shield (and the other guy didn't even flinch. There should at least have been a reaction). Also, you need to do more with the legs.

Good animation overall bar these niggles. Get a better version of this done and we'll love it.

Just Fell Short

Didn't appeal to me because it ended much too quickly. However, you have some skill here. Work on a longer version and tidy up some of the graphics and it'll be diamond.

ZombieToaster responds:

thansk for the comment, i will make it longer in the future.

and i also has a secqeal to make.

:p

Welcome to the portal young housemate who's skills in Lightwave are better than mine.

Hope the next one's longer. You did well to compress a 3d program's output into 1.1mb. Sound's a bit poor, and some of it defies physics, but it's a good first submission.

Super-Blackball responds:

goodo thanks

Did good guys. Keep up appearances

Shame I didn't have the resources to take part (cause I know you asked me about doing ten seconds of lipsyncing two or so weeks ago). But I'm wondering how many of the other artists knew people they detested were involved.

I doubt you'd have got KoalaClock and Wonchop on the same Flash any other way.

On the plus side, some people blew me away with thier work. Namely Aurora, GearZero, The Flasher, Cycon and Lecca.

So yeah. You deserve daily first for this, but it's not inspired faith in the Sheezy Flash Community for me. Yet

Good Presentation

Well done. Didn't expect much from the title, but it's a great film (for what it's covering...). Well executed.

I knew you worked a lot on this

I fived you. Just like I do for most of the people from LFF. It was also genuinely funny.

That, and you like the Offspring, like me. :p

The faces seem like a motion tweened Gerkinman's, but cleaner. Nice use of the 3d graphics, and well done. Shows how much work you put into this. Work on your music splicing, and you'll be perfect

Qwazin responds:

Thanks, and indeed, the sound could have been better. Gotta work on that part. ^^; Thanks for the five. =)

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