Score: 3

"Extend. Spell"

submission: Manhunt:the city ep.1

date: February 8, 2005

If you're going to resort to making us read a chunk of text, at least make sure you're going to spell it all correctly...

Make this longer as well... Much too short to remain here

Score: 7

"Best one so far"

submission: Shaolin Boy Episode 3

date: February 8, 2005

I'll complain in real life :p

Score: 2

"Mild"

submission: TOPGUN 18

date: February 6, 2005

It's good, and worthy of staying, but you can improve in so many ways. The feeling of speed of two supersonic jets dogfighting wasn't really there, and the angles of viewing the planes sometimes messed up.

Play about with constructing the F-18's so they look right from different angles.

Also, no pilot in the world world ever engage another plane over friendly city soil. They're not even allowed over it normally...

Score: 6

"Timing was almost perfect."

submission: Raymond

date: February 3, 2005

The only flaw was it was much too short to be a finished piece. I liked it. The animation was smooth and it synced with the movie (bar the guy going to eat the egg). I like

Score: 5

"I'll never look at my toaster the same way..."

submission: Eatin' Toast

date: February 2, 2005

Great sense of timing with the sounds and the animation. Comedy was a bit bittersweet since the Toaster didn't come out on top (poor thing. No happy ending... or at least no moral victory for the violated toaster).

Single complaint was the preloader - lack of loading bar made me wonder if the thing was actually loading.

Good flash though. Deserves a green ribbon at least.

Score: 5

"Good. Not great. But should stay"

submission: Rome: Gladiators

date: January 31, 2005

I can see you tried more than most stick artists do. For that I'm greatful. People who do sticks should be making stuff of this quality and better.

Still. It's not perfect. The music in the preloader stops it loading quickly, and the fight scene did get a bit repeatative with him smashing the shield (and the other guy didn't even flinch. There should at least have been a reaction). Also, you need to do more with the legs.

Good animation overall bar these niggles. Get a better version of this done and we'll love it.

Score: 3

"Just Fell Short"

submission: AbominationX v2

date: January 30, 2005

Didn't appeal to me because it ended much too quickly. However, you have some skill here. Work on a longer version and tidy up some of the graphics and it'll be diamond.

Score: 6

"A bit finicky, but good"

submission: Patch-co MiniGolf!

date: January 30, 2005

Yeah. It's a bit tempramental at times to balance the power. But it's all there to make a good game. You can line up a shot whilst the ball's in motion, and that's a major bug.

Great result, and the music's nice. What is it?

Score: 6

":p"

submission: Shaolin Boy Episode 1

date: January 23, 2005

Welcome to the portal young housemate who's skills in Lightwave are better than mine.

Hope the next one's longer. You did well to compress a 3d program's output into 1.1mb. Sound's a bit poor, and some of it defies physics, but it's a good first submission.

Score: 9

"Did good guys. Keep up appearances"

submission: One Love

date: January 22, 2005

Shame I didn't have the resources to take part (cause I know you asked me about doing ten seconds of lipsyncing two or so weeks ago). But I'm wondering how many of the other artists knew people they detested were involved.

I doubt you'd have got KoalaClock and Wonchop on the same Flash any other way.

On the plus side, some people blew me away with thier work. Namely Aurora, GearZero, The Flasher, Cycon and Lecca.

So yeah. You deserve daily first for this, but it's not inspired faith in the Sheezy Flash Community for me. Yet